Awesome! Great work, and glad you enjoyed the book!
Pretty strong, Sarah! Nice overall composition. The one area I'd consider reworking is the base of the skeleton and the shading on Pinocchio's face. That area is very busy, has a tangent or two, and doesn't read well. In fact, you could use paler outlines for the background elements so that Pinocchio and the foreground elements stand out more. The rest is very cool! Congrats!!!